{"id":356,"date":"2013-12-16T23:36:12","date_gmt":"2013-12-17T04:36:12","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/?p=356"},"modified":"2013-12-16T19:51:56","modified_gmt":"2013-12-17T00:51:56","slug":"dealing-with-critique-on-your-novel","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/dealing-with-critique-on-your-novel\/","title":{"rendered":"Dealing with critique on your novel"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-359\" alt=\"Criticism\" src=\"https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-300x224.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"224\" srcset=\"https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-300x224.jpg 300w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-150x112.jpg 150w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-768x574.jpg 768w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-1024x765.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-200x149.jpg 200w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-800x598.jpg 800w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-536x400.jpg 536w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-80x60.jpg 80w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-220x164.jpg 220w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-134x100.jpg 134w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-201x150.jpg 201w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-319x238.jpg 319w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-556x415.jpg 556w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-652x487.jpg 652w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-797x595.jpg 797w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7-20x15.jpg 20w, https:\/\/lgoconnor.com\/site\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/12\/photo-7.jpg 1296w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><b>You\u2019ve received criticism on your novel. Now what?<\/b><\/p>\n<p>But, hopefully, you\u2019ll never see this on your manuscript!<\/p>\n<p>So you\u2019ve engaged beta readers, a critique partner or group, an editor, or someone else that has seen your work and has an opinion on what\u2019s not working and how to make it better. (I\u2019m assuming you trust the people you\u2019ve chosen and they have no ulterior motives. Pick your critiquers wisely.)<\/p>\n<p><b><i>Now what?<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>You stare at the email, written ink on the page, or track changes in your manuscript and you _____ (fill in the blank).<\/p>\n<p>Before you even look at the critique, always assume positive intent. Then prepare yourself to read it and walk away afterwards. It takes time to process some critique.<\/p>\n<p>I don\u2019t think there\u2019s a writer out there who hasn\u2019t received constructive criticism that hasn\u2019t ruffled their proverbial feathers. Now that you\u2019ve received it, how do you filter and process it?<\/p>\n<p>Start with this as your filter: \u201cWithin every critique there is a seed of truth.\u201d This is especially true if multiple people point out the same issue. If these people see it, so will an agent or a reviewer, only quicker.<\/p>\n<p>Bucket it into three categories in your mind: tweaks, small adjustments, and substantive developmental changes with ripples.<\/p>\n<p>The tweaks and typos are no-brainers. Just do them. Small adjustments that make sense? Just do them too. Comments that show the reader obviously missed a key point? Determine whether you need to add more for the reader, or if this person just missed it. The key to that one: if multiple people made the same comment, add more. If not, think carefully and possibly discard. Good rule of thumb I learned from one of my editors: don\u2019t \u201cdumb things down\u201d to your lowest common denominator. It\u2019s our job as the writer to make sure our reader\u2019s get it\u2014but within reason\u2014and without insulting the intelligence of the rest of our readers.<\/p>\n<p>When it comes to the larger issues, what then? Those require more thought, and that\u2019s where you need to put on your \u2018accept \/ reject\u2019 hat. But before you snap that beanie securely on your noggin, take a step back and ask yourself: would this requested change make my book better?<\/p>\n<p>To illustrate this for you: under a tight final copyedit deadline for my upcoming novel my die-hard core group of betas gave me a few substantive items:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>One beta felt I should take the fifth chapter and make it the prologue<\/li>\n<li>Another beta felt that one of the critical ending scenes when my characters finally face the \u2018music\u2019, so to speak, wasn\u2019t \u2018scary\u2019 or \u2018harrowing\u2019 enough. I needed to raise the stakes and make my characters (and the reader) squirm more.<\/li>\n<li>Another beta didn\u2019t buy a scene where two of my characters came together in a romantic moment. She didn\u2019t feel given the strife between them, that my male character would react that way.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>All of these scenes were pivotal with a ton of ripple impact.<\/p>\n<p><b><i>So what did I do?<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>The first change, I discarded. I polled my other betas and they voted it down, plus it would have made for a double Prologue. The one already there couldn\u2019t go anywhere else.<\/p>\n<p>The second change, I held back my second round edits and rewrote the entire scene, expanded it, and raised the stakes. In doing so, I came up with a much more convincing conclusion and stronger ending.<\/p>\n<p>The third change? That was the hardest because I had to get my character\u2019s reaction right based on his issues that will surface over the next two books, so I sent him to \u201cThe Character Therapist\u201d! <a href=\"http:\/\/charactertherapist.com\/\">http:\/\/charactertherapist.com\/<\/a> Jeannie Campbell has an awesome blog where she analyzes characters just like she would a real person. So, I packaged up all his scenes, trauma, and baggage and sent it over for a special session. Based on Jeannie\u2019s feedback, I made changes to his scenes and added a pre-scene to make his reaction much more plausible.<\/p>\n<p>The bottom line: if it wasn\u2019t for the feedback I received from my \u2018village\u2019 as I call them, and all the time they spent, TRINITY STONES wouldn\u2019t be as strong as it is now.<\/p>\n<p><b><i>Any advice on receiving critique to share with us?<\/i><\/b><\/p>\n<p>Write on!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You\u2019ve received criticism on your novel. Now what? But, hopefully, you\u2019ll never see this on your manuscript! So you\u2019ve engaged beta readers, a critique partner or group, an editor, or someone else that has seen your work and has an opinion on what\u2019s not working and how to make it better. 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